I feel so helpless
as if my feet are tied,
throat has dried,
I have gone voiceless.
I wish you’d know, if I could
then I would
surely take your place,
and protect you in any case.
But such is my fate,
I am behind that locked gate,
my eyes witness the cheating.
Cursed is my heart which still keeps beating.
I wish the time would wait,
but it might already be too late.
Your wounds have stopped bleeding,
everyone still is sleeping.
I screamed! I wailed!
All to no avail.
The ship, I know, has sailed
and sadly I have failed.
I feel so helpless,
as if my feet are tied,
throat has dried,
I have gone lifeless.
This is my second poem. For me, it describes my sheer helplessness in a situation when I am unable to see any silver lining in a dark cloud. The poem is not cheerful but I hope you like it. If you can relate, please let me know!
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कल्पनाओं का खेल है सब और आप उनमें भी प्रवीण करते हो✍️
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sahi kaha aapne! sb kch imagination ka hi khel he! Thank you so much for your kind words!
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आप सराहनीय हैं 🙏
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Brought me to tears.
Thank you so much for sharing this.
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It’s an emotional piece, I am glad that my words moved you! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me ❤️
Have a great day 🙂
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Oh goodness do I relate to your words. Beautiful poem Bulbul. I believe sad honest poetry is some of the most compelling and interesting work. Love ya Joni.
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I agree completely dear! Sadness sometimes can be the best muse.
Thanks for the appreciation, certainly means a lot to me!
❤️❤️☺️
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I might be the exception here but these kinds of poems cheers me up. Nice poem.
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Thank you so much, I am glad that you enjoyed it!
Also, many thanks for joining me in my Bubble, hope you enjoy it. Cheers, AS 🙂
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Hi Akanksha, I have nominated you for Sunshine Blogger Award
Check the post
https://believestrong.wordpress.com/2019/11/07/sunshine-blogger-award/
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Thank you so much, Manoj. I am really honored and appreciate the gesture. 🙂
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hi Manoj, I’ve completed the award challenge and answered your questions. You can read them here:
https://bulbulsbubble.home.blog/2019/11/10/sunshine-blogger-award/
Thanks again for the nomination 🙂
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Very powerful. There are times when everyone feels helpless and I am glad you could express those feelings so well.
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I am glad you think so. Thanks 😊
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With poetry, the words written speak not only to the writer but to those who read it. Great poem!
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That’s indeed true, John. Thanks, I appreciate your kind words.
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Sure as hell I can relate. Good work!
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Thanks Antony. 🙂
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It might not be cheerful but still it’s beautiful
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Thank you !
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