Some Kicks

Posted on November 21, 2019January 6, 2020 by Bulbul

This got published on Friday Flash Fiction. You can read it here: Some Kicks.

As promised, a Thursday Tiny Tale. I must say it is not as easy to write a complete, comprehensible story in just 100 words as I thought it would be. Deciding what not to write is proving to be more difficult for me. Please feel free to share your thoughts and feedback. I highly appreciate it!

Published by Bulbul

A young writer from India who has loved stories since she was able to understand one. Now, she tries weaving them herself. View all posts by Bulbul

23 thoughts on “Some Kicks”

parkermccoy January 27, 20202:53 am Reply

It’s tricky, deciding what to leave out. You did very well, though! Great post!

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1. A.S. January 27, 202010:55 am Reply
  
  I agree, as the size gets smaller it gets difficult to decide what not to include. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on this with me! I am glad that you enjoyed it.
  
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jonicaggiano December 11, 201910:38 pm Reply

I love your story it is tender and visual which I always appreciate. Very nice. Love ❤️ Joni

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1. A.S. December 11, 201910:46 pm Reply
  
  I am glad that you enjoyed it.
  A really big THANK YOU for all your amazing and lovely comments, they mean a lot to me and quite honestly, made the ending of my shitty day, a happy one. I really hope you have a great week.
  Sending my heartfelt Wishes and prayers your way. Love B ❤️❤️
  
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  1. jonicaggiano December 11, 201911:10 pm Reply
    
    Thank you my friend. Hugs. May a moonbeam shine a light on your path this evening and may it be sprinkled with fairy dust that illuminates your walk with lovely creatures that sing songs written just for you. May they place new and beautiful memories held in dust which replace the old. Love ❤️ Joni 🙏
    
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    1. A.S. December 11, 201911:15 pm Reply
      
      😱😱😨 I have never, in my whole life, heard words more beautiful than these.
      You rendered me speechless, Joni.
      I wish you the same and more. 🙂
      Much love, Bulbul. ❤️❤️
      
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      1. jonicaggiano December 13, 20197:48 pm Reply
        
        Oh I am so glad! Thank you sweet Bulbul I am glad it touched you. Love 💕 Joni. Hugs
        
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        A.S. December 13, 201910:17 pm Reply
        
        Xoxo 🙂
        
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dharkanein December 9, 20197:32 pm Reply

It’s TRUE that iys hard to write an impactful story in just 100 words but there you have delivered a fabulous story, to be felt deep inside.

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1. A.S. December 9, 20198:36 pm Reply
  
  Thank you so much for your kind words! I am glad you like it. 🙂
  
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Laleh Chini November 29, 201912:41 am Reply

Thanks for the following dear.❤️

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1. A.S. November 30, 20193:20 pm Reply
  
  Thank you to you too…It was my pleasure Laleh, hoping to read more from you 🙂
  
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  1. Laleh Chini November 30, 20198:54 pm Reply
    
    Appreciate it.❤️🌹
    
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Arushi November 22, 20191:10 pm Reply

Okay this was a hard task and you passed it beautifully. It was a really amazing piece.

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1. Bulbul November 22, 20191:14 pm Reply
  
  Thank you, Arushi. Your words are a motivation. 🙂
  
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JAYANT November 22, 20192:58 am Reply

The way you tried indicating this beautiful scenario is way beyond description! ❤

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1. Bulbul November 22, 20198:53 am Reply
  
  Thanks so much, Jayant. I am so glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. 🙂
  
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Antony H. November 21, 20199:13 pm Reply

You grow with your tasks and the results are amazing sometimes 🙂 Good work!

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1. Bulbul November 21, 20199:53 pm Reply
  
  That is so true, Antony. Thank you so much for your support! I appreciate it. 🙂
  
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  1. Antony H. November 22, 201912:00 am Reply
    
    You’re very welcome, that’s why you’re here :))
    
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    1. Bulbul November 22, 201912:04 am Reply
      
      Yes, indeed as are you and I must say it’s a good place to be. 🙂
      
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JarOfPoetry November 21, 20195:38 pm Reply

I agree that it is difficult. But the fact that you test yourself only proves that you are willing to try anyway. That, in itself, is something worth admiring.

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1. Bulbul November 21, 20196:16 pm Reply
  
  Thank you, John! You always say such nice things. 🙂
  
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