This got published on Friday Flash Fiction. You can read it here: Some Kicks.
As promised, a Thursday Tiny Tale. I must say it is not as easy to write a complete, comprehensible story in just 100 words as I thought it would be. Deciding what not to write is proving to be more difficult for me. Please feel free to share your thoughts and feedback. I highly appreciate it!
It’s tricky, deciding what to leave out. You did very well, though! Great post!
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I agree, as the size gets smaller it gets difficult to decide what not to include. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts on this with me! I am glad that you enjoyed it.
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I love your story it is tender and visual which I always appreciate. Very nice. Love ❤️ Joni
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I am glad that you enjoyed it.
A really big THANK YOU for all your amazing and lovely comments, they mean a lot to me and quite honestly, made the ending of my shitty day, a happy one. I really hope you have a great week.
Sending my heartfelt Wishes and prayers your way. Love B ❤️❤️
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Thank you my friend. Hugs. May a moonbeam shine a light on your path this evening and may it be sprinkled with fairy dust that illuminates your walk with lovely creatures that sing songs written just for you. May they place new and beautiful memories held in dust which replace the old. Love ❤️ Joni 🙏
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😱😱😨 I have never, in my whole life, heard words more beautiful than these.
You rendered me speechless, Joni.
I wish you the same and more. 🙂
Much love, Bulbul. ❤️❤️
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Oh I am so glad! Thank you sweet Bulbul I am glad it touched you. Love 💕 Joni. Hugs
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Xoxo 🙂
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It’s TRUE that iys hard to write an impactful story in just 100 words but there you have delivered a fabulous story, to be felt deep inside.
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Thank you so much for your kind words! I am glad you like it. 🙂
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Thanks for the following dear.❤️
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Thank you to you too…It was my pleasure Laleh, hoping to read more from you 🙂
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Appreciate it.❤️🌹
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Okay this was a hard task and you passed it beautifully. It was a really amazing piece.
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Thank you, Arushi. Your words are a motivation. 🙂
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The way you tried indicating this beautiful scenario is way beyond description! ❤
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Thanks so much, Jayant. I am so glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts. 🙂
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You grow with your tasks and the results are amazing sometimes 🙂 Good work!
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That is so true, Antony. Thank you so much for your support! I appreciate it. 🙂
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You’re very welcome, that’s why you’re here :))
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Yes, indeed as are you and I must say it’s a good place to be. 🙂
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I agree that it is difficult. But the fact that you test yourself only proves that you are willing to try anyway. That, in itself, is something worth admiring.
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Thank you, John! You always say such nice things. 🙂
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