Whispers, hushed murmuring Dark creatures in the alley shimmering The roar and the growl is the old game Now they saunter amidst, like dogs tame With the moves of chess board And pocket full of hidden swords They are ready to pounce Watch out! Everywhere they bounce Listen to their murky voices As the monster inside you rejoices He sings his old tune And you start dancing like a loon Innocent eyes watch your rave Dig up the earth, seeking a cave To hide till a new dawn rises over the bloodied skies
en attente means ‘awaiting’, in french, according to Google (I hope I have used it correctly). For perspective, this is in reference to the incidents of US capitol & frankly, can be extrapolated to many incidents in my own country (if you catch my drift).
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Well done dearest friend. A beautiful piece.
“The roar and the growl is the old game
Now they saunter amidst, like dogs tame
With the moves of chess board
And pocket full of hidden swords
They are ready to pounce”
I love the descriptive words and visuals and I really loved your ending. Great writing my friend. Love to you and your family. xoxoxoxo Joni
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That’s so sweet of you, Joni, I am grateful to know that you enjoyed it.
Thank you for reading, Joni, I know I haven’t been present here lately (due to personal commitments), but I hope to rectify it in future.
Cheers and love to you and yours. xoxox
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I understand and I believe we all do. Everyone has things they have to do. We all have to slow down some times to take care of life. Your writing is always beautiful my friend and a joy to read. Love you and love to your family too. ❤️🤗🦋😘💐🧚♂️🌷
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Thank you for all the understanding, dear, truly it is a blessing.
Love and care to you and your family! 💕😘🤗🙏
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❤️🤗🦋😘💝
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Hey Bubble, I just joined your mailing list.
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Wow! So glad to have you on board, Jude!! I hope that you’ll like it here.
Thank you! 🤗🥂💙
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So well done..👍
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Grateful to hear it, Pallavi! Thank you 🙏✨🤗
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^^Cant say much more!^^
Be blessed BB!
~FF
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Thank you, FF, for your constant support and kindness.
Stay warm, friend! 🙏✨🥂
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First lines especially well written. Evocative!! Whatever’s in me is definitely not rejoicing over those incidents… love the footnote. Very dramatic piece, dear A. There’s a lot of frightening stuff out there these days… and throughout the past millennia… guess we have to take action toward that new dawn. Easier said than done… hugs to you, and may things get better. ❤︎🌻🔆💛
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Thank you, dearest Lia, for your kindest of words! I try so hard these days to not be affected by whatever that is happening out in the society but sometimes it just gets difficult and it finds its outlet.
New dawn, amen to that!
xoxo stay bright, love, 💕💙🥂
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It’s the same for me gal. :)) But your piece was mesmerizing. Always wonderful to chat with you in comments, and thanks so much for your love and brightness. 💗🔆
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I fee the same, Lia!
xoxo🙏✨💙
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